Tag: Monica Killingsworth

Writing Unrepentant Characters

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From the Iliad to the western dime novels, there is a long history of anti-heroes or protagonists that behave with only their self interest in mind and lack virtue, morality, or other heroic values. To the writer, telling a story about such characters provides particular challenges. If a character has no redeeming qualities the reader may not care at all what happens to the protagonist and quit reading. I’ve discarded many books and short stories, because I didn’t care about the protagonist enough to continue.

So what works? What can bring a reader to the table when your main character is a thoroughly unrepentant character of the lowest morals?

1. Cheat Around the Edges: Though your character lacks many moral principles, he does have at least one good quality or admirable goal. An example of this sort of character is James Bond, who has little in the way of morals or principles (or is willing to compromise them to accomplish his goals), yet he doesn’t hesitate to lay his life on the line to protect England from villainous organizations of all stripes and hues. This helps us buy into Bond and care what happens to him, even as he uses and discards strings of women with little regard to what happens to them after he gets the information he wants. Also, Fleming does a good job of showing Bond’s inner turmoil, which the movies rarely reflect, and also of showing the physical and mental toll that his job takes.

2. Evil vs. Less Evil: The protagonist, though not motivated by the welfare of others, is acting against a greater evil than he, so in effect he becomes the ‘good guy’ of the piece by contrast. An example of this is Moorcock’s Elric of Melnibone.

3. Selective Story Telling: Your character is a ruthless mercenary who has slaughtered many innocents, but you choose only to tell the stories where he has been wronged by someone else and is seeking redress, or where for some reason he decides that it is in his interest to help another. Conan is a good example of this sort of character. On close examination of his character he has no moral qualms about killing and plundering, but those incidents are glossed over somewhat and the Robert E Howard stories tend to incorporate the first two elements of Cheating Around the Edges and Evil vs. Less Evil. This way, we can relate to Conan, even though the reality is that he might knife us in a dark alley if he thought we might have a few coins in our pocket.

4. Machinations and Train Wrecks: In part five of Through the Groaning Earth,  The Jewels of Sagra Yoth, I tell the story of Willen, who has no redeeming qualities whatsoever except for unrestrained ambition. He’s a two-bit loser thief and murderer out to make a name for himself. To my surprise, I’ve had comments from readers that this is one of their favorite sections from the book. Why does this section work, when there is utterly no reason to like Willen or care what happens to him? Here’s my theory:

a) The character has a clearly defined goal

b) The character struggles mightily to gain that goal

c)The character uses every bit of his limited brain power to orchestrate his theft, and so we are interested in the machinations and his underhanded efforts.

d)The story isn’t long. The readers don’t have to spend an entire novel following an utterly despicable character before they see his miserable fate. 

e)The reader wants to watch the train wreck.

I think this last bit cannot be underestimated. Not only do readers deserve to see the character reap the whirlwind of his poor choices, but the writer has a duty to show that bad decisions have bad consequences. Willen struggles mightily to steal the Jewels of Sagra Yoth and then, in the end, all his evil actions come back to haunt him, and he realizes that maybe he’s not quite as smart as he thought.

For another example of thoroughly unrepentant and irredeemable characters look to Derrick Ferguson’s Diamondback stories (shortly to again be available for contributors to his Patreon account). These stories don’t so much use the devices of Cheating around the Edges or Evil vs. Less Evil, or even Selective Story Telling, but rely on the Machinations and Train Wreck principles. The reader is enthralled by all the machinations, double dealings, and back-stabbings, and wants to see the ensuing train wreck. Honestly, I didn’t care so much if the deadly killer Diamondback lived or died, but I did want to see how everything played out, and that kept me reading until the very last word.

5. Pair the irredeemable character with someone the reader can care about. This is a technique I use in Dead Blonde Walking, where the protagonist is a mostly heartless assassin with only a couple of identifiably good qualities (and there is some uncertainty there). By herself, Monica Killingsworth (who appears in quite a number of my books and various short story collections) is something of an emotional cipher and it often takes interaction with another character, usually one the reader can emotionally invest his or herself, to compare and contrast, and give further interest to the story.

 

Who’s Who in the Weird Worlds?

The wrap-around cover by the illustrious MD Jackson pictures quite a number of characters as written by author Joel Jenkins. Here is the complete listing:

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Left to right:

  1. Tredia, former exile and new ally of the Muvari (appearing in the Dire Planet series)
  2. Naegrick, former member of the Scurm tribe and now friend and ally of Garvey Dire (appearing in the Dire Planet series)
  3. The Adder, Jean Paul Belanger–Master thespian and disguise artist, and midnight avenger
  4. The Eel, Vincent Spinelli–Master of escape, reformed thief, and midnight avenger
  5. (sitting on shoulder) Fineous the clever crow
  6. Jake Shaunessy–Who had an unfortunate encounter with vampires at a graduation party (also appearing in The Teeth of Necropolis)
  7. Amelia Earhart–famous pilot and adventurer who, on our earth, disappeared on a flight over the Pacific Ocean.
  8. Azark–shipwrecked adventurer who finds himself in entangled in the bewildering machinations of the guilds of Bathos (appearing in the Tales from the City of Bathos series)
  9. Astin-Resident of Saffronyia and son of the Mayor. Astin is known for his inexplicable ability to shoot people or creatures in the eye, even when it is not intended.
  10. The much maligned and put upon Mayor of the mystical land of Saffronyia, who as of yet remains unnamed.
  11. Porter Rockwell-famed Mormon gunman, who is said to have killed more outlaws than Wyatt Earp, Doc Holladay, Tom Horn and Bat Masterson combined.
  12. Matthias Gantlet–famous rock vocalist of the Gantlet Brothers, German defector, and adventurer (appearing in the Gantlet Brothers series)
  13. Blake Hawkins–Once he fought Matthias Gantlet to a standstill, reformed drug-dealer and criminal, now a personal bodyguard to Matthias Gantlet’s family. (appearing in the Gantlet Brother series)
  14. Damon St. Cloud–Former reporter and vampire hunter, who once lost his family to bloodsuckers because he came too close to uncovering the truth. (appearing in the Denbrook Supernatural series)
  15. Monica Killingsworth-Ice cold assassin and enemy of the Gantlet Brothers (appearing in Dead Blonde Walking, Gantlet Brothers: Sold Out, The Specialists)

Killingsworth Cover Cavalcade

Though ice cold assassin Monica Killingsworth has just one book to call her own, she has appeared on a number of covers.

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Dead Blonde Walking, PulpWork Press (2016)
Cover by Damon Orrell
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The Gantlet Brothers: Sold Out, PulpWork Press (2013)
Cover by MD Jackson
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Weird Worlds of Joel Jenkins, PulpWork Press (2013)
Cover by MD Jackson
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The Dame Did It, Pro Se Press (2015)
Cover by Jeff Hayes

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PulpWork Christmas Special 2011, PulpWork Press
Cover by MD Jackson
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PulpWork Christmas Special 2013, PulpWork Press
Cover Design by Joel Jenkins
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Bonus illustration from The False-Faced Killer, which appears in Legends of New Pulp, published by Airship 27(2016). Illustration by Ron Root.